the charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts illustrate the data about the destination of
UK
postgraduates and graduates (excluding full-time Use synonyms
work
)in different four categories in 2008.
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Overall
, the highest number of Linking Words
graduate
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students
in the Use synonyms
UK
were left for Use synonyms
further
study in 2008. From the first bar graph, we see that 17,735 thousand Linking Words
graduate
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students
are abandoned for part-time Use synonyms
work
. Use synonyms
whereas
, only 2,535 thousand postgraduate pupils are left for part-time jobs.For voluntary Linking Words
work
3,500 Use synonyms
graduate
teenagers were gone in 2008 as well and 345 postgraduate admissions were Use synonyms
also
gone.
From the second bar chart, we observed that the maximum number of postgraduate Linking Words
students
departed for only Use synonyms
further
study in the Linking Words
UK
. Use synonyms
While
just 1,625 postgraduate Linking Words
students
remain in the unemployment category. Use synonyms
Also
, for the unemployment category 16,235 Linking Words
graduate
teenagers remain in the year of 2008.
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To sum up
, the biggest number of Linking Words
graduate
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students
are left for part-time Use synonyms
work
, voluntary Use synonyms
work
, and Use synonyms
further
study in the Linking Words
UK
throughout the period.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, work, graduate, students with synonyms.
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