The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The given line graph illustrates data about the total number of markets closed and opened in one country between the period of 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, we observed that most of the stores were opened from 2011 to 2018. In 2011, around 8500
thousand
shops
were opened.
Whereas
around 6500
thousand
shops
were closed in that
year
. In the next
year
, the expenditure on opened
shops
was significantly decreased at 4000
thousand
. And the total of closed
shops
gradually declined to 6000
thousand
.
Then
in the
year
2013, the value of the number of openings and closures of
shops
sharply climbed at 5000
thousand
and 7000
thousand
respectively. In 2015, the value of the number of
shops
dramatically bottomed out at around 500 hundred.
Then
in the next
year
, it sharply climbed to 5000
thousand
. From 2016 to 2018 amount of closed outlets remained steady at around 5100
thousand
.
Moreover
, the value of the opened shop slowly decreased to 3000
thousand
in 2018.
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