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The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The information about the
comparision
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comparison
 of
food
 consumption between the
world
 and two Asian countries
such
 as
China
 and
India
 in the year 2008 is depicted by given circular charts.
Overall
, the most striking feature of the given chart is that processed
food
 is the major
food
 choice of people either in the
world
 or in the other two countries,
while
 less contributing foods are nuts and seeds in the
world
 and
India
whereas
 in
China
 animal
food
 is least consumed by the populace. Taking a cursory glance, it can be clearly manifested that the percentage of vegetables and fruits is nearly equal in the
world
 and
china
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China
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 as compared to
India
 which is 23%.
However
, processed
food
 occupies the highest space in
India
,
China
 and the
world
 with the percentage of 39%, 34% and 41% respectively. Moving to
the
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apply
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further
 details, a difference of almost 11.5 % accounted for the flesh
food
 intake between the
world
,
India
 and
China
 as the former two contributed around 26.5% and the
later
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latter
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 was 15%. Surprisingly, nuts and seeds
seems
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seem
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 to be the less favourites of people of the
world
 and
india
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India
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 with figures 4% and 11%.
On the other hand
, Chinese people
understands
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understand
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 the importance of seeds and nuts;
therefore
, these are consumed more in
China
 with a figure of 19% in
comparision
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comparison
 to
its
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their
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 counterparts.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, world, china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • average consumption
  • worldwide
  • data
  • comparison
  • differences
  • similarities
  • food items
  • categories
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • majority
  • minority
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