You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved

to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The visual below portrays the types of motives that caused people to migrate to a metropolitan area in a country from 2000 to 2015. There are four distinctive reasons that can be classified into two divisions, which are career and personal streams. All of them are depicted with unique colours. Blue represents labour, orange is for education, grey resembles relatives, and yellow is for a voyage. Even though a few lines can be compiled into one class, none of them is conspicuously painted with
a similar hues
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similar hues
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Overall
, the numbers of surveyees are displayed in ten thousand, from 10,000 up to 100,000. By far, work opportunities have come on top ever since the beginning of the chart's period.
In contrast
, adventure consistently remained the least until the end. Both of them had never intertwined until the survey ended. From the career-oriented background, there is an evident change for two reasons. At
first,
the study was the lowest with approximately 250,000 people supporting it.
However
, throughout the years, it soared and
finally
collided with employment in 2015 with an almost five times increase.
On the other hand
, employment began to take a dip five years earlier. Ending its growth with a decrease of 4 per cent lower than its peak. Turning to the personal-oriented motive, not much has changed. From the initial point, adventure and family only share slight differences. The reason for relatives started to override from 2005 and kept adding numbers until 5 years later. Meanwhile, the voyage has grown steadily and is just accountable for five-sevenths lower than its family/ friends class.
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