The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the annual income from
sales
of four different types of video games which are named mobile phone, online,
consoles
and handheld devices, from 2000 to 2006.
Overall
,
this
chart illustrates that the
consoles game
Fix the agreement mistake
number of console games
show examples
decreased during
seven
Correct determiner usage
the
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- year period and the rest of them experienced
increasing
Correct article usage
an increasing
show examples
trend between 2000 and 2006.
This
chart indicates that the income from
sales
of handheld devices and
consoles
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
show examples
$ about 11 and 6
billion
in 2000 and there
are
Wrong verb form
were
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no
sales
for mobile
phone
Fix the agreement mistake
phones
show examples
and online
game
Fix the agreement mistake
games
show examples
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
this
year. Over
six
Correct article usage
the six
show examples
next years, the
sales
of
consoles game
Fix the agreement mistake
console games
show examples
fell
into
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to
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$3
billion
, but mobile phone games dramatically increased to just over $6
billion
in 2006 from zero in 2000. handheld devices and online games
also
rose to $15 and 5
billion
in 2005. These items kept their increasing trend during the next year and reached
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
$ 18 and 7
billion
in 2006.
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