The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

These pie charts , give the information about differences between girl's and boy's activities that they participate in .

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a large number of

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participate in reading , reading is not a popular activity for

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and that number is almost zero. regarding

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prefer to play computer games with a 34% participation

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than other activities ,playing basketball is the second popular leisure by almost 26%

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of the number of

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. As you can see , basketball followed by soccer which exercised by 17%. skateboarding and listening to music are less preferable activities , chosen by 11% and 10% of

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respectively. As the chart shows, reading is the least popular cultural activity among

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, representing only two per cent. Turning to the second chart, almost most

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choose dancing for their leisure

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of participation. Unlike

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reading is in second most popular cultural activity by 21 % among

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. computer games and netball , they are ranked third and fourth respectively by order 16% and 15%.

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of participation in listening to music is the same in both charts ,

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includes 10% of the leisures of

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and

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