🔶Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online. 🔸Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world, post-COVID, most trade activities take place online rather than offline or in the office. There are many
benifits
of Correct your spelling
benefits
this
online work
experience as it gives opportunity
for family Add an article
an opportunity
the opportunity
time
. However
, too much indulgence of
personal life Change preposition
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professional grounds can have negative effects as well. I have a strong opinion that online training and trading Change preposition
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is
way more productive than in-office set-up.
On one hand, there are some disadvantages to remote meetings, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
such
as having too much screen time
makes a human being anxious and unattentive if the training duration exceeds. Learning virtually is a good medium if the long training is conducted in a hybrid learning model. Working in a virtual environment also
allows an employee to work
from home or gives them mobility during their training period. Not only, long virtual work
does not allow you to get to know your colleagues better and that might reflect in losing interest in work
but also
, it
will Correct word choice
but it
impact
social life.
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also impact
On the other hand
, there are many advantages of remote jobs. One of the biggest is that an individual is allowed to do the job from anywhere, any place. One just needs their laptop and saves time
and money on travelling to an office for a conversation. For example
, this
way of working has enabled working women to work
from their homes and take care of their families in India. Working from anywhere is the biggest advantage that today's generation of digital nomads have
.
In conclusion, we can say that whether an individual is working remotely or is present on the job physically both have pros and cons. People get family Change the verb form
has
time
because of offline working whereas
they miss the chance to collaborate with colleagues. So, It can be said that working remotely has several advantages and thus
it outweighs the disadvantages.Submitted by avesh1409 on
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