The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
The bar chart compares the
number
of people in
further
education in three separate years in Britain based on their gender and
also
whether they are educated part-time or full-time.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of both female and male who educate part-time is far more than those educating full-time.
Also
, an increase is experienced in their
number
after each decade, irregular to their gender. In 1970/71, almost 1 million men were studying part-time in
further
education, compared to only just above 100,000 men who were studying full-time.
Similarly
, the
number
of part-time female
students
this
year was ten times as high as those who were studying full-time at roughly 750,000 and 75,000, respectively.
Following
this
, in 1980/81 and 1990/91, the
number
of full-time
students
rose considerably, reaching about 250,000 for both male and female
students
.
While
part-time attendants became less popular among men during the period shown, the
number
of female
students
who attended
further
education witnessed a significant increase, peaking at approximately 1,100,000 in 1990/91.
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