The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
The bar chart compares the
number
of people in further
education in three separate years in Britain based on their gender and also
whether they are educated part-time or full-time.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of both female and male who educate part-time is far more than those educating full-time. Also
, an increase is experienced in their number
after each decade, irregular to their gender.
In 1970/71, almost 1 million men were studying part-time in further
education, compared to only just above 100,000 men who were studying full-time. Similarly
, the number
of part-time female students
this
year was ten times as high as those who were studying full-time at roughly 750,000 and 75,000, respectively.
Following
this
, in 1980/81 and 1990/91, the number
of full-time students
rose considerably, reaching about 250,000 for both male and female students
. While
part-time attendants became less popular among men during the period shown, the number
of female students
who attended further
education witnessed a significant increase, peaking at approximately 1,100,000 in 1990/91.Submitted by TUTOO on
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