The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The left and right buildings represent the current structure of the college and the changes which will done as planned.

Overall

, the infrastructure of both the present institution and the future plan is the same but some major and minor changes occurred including the tooth path and garden area which have been replaced by a parking zone

additionally

some minor changes like the toilet being shifted from the front to backside.

However

, the entrance of the college is planned to develop in forthcoming in front of the bus stop.

In addition

, the reception area changed from classroom space which is now in front of the entrance of the building.

Moreover

, classrooms are increased in the future plans

along with

a shop opening just behind the lunch area and a toilet is

also

situated near the shop in the planned infrastructure.

Furthermore

, the library is

also

shifted to the left side of the entry gate of the institution.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

Some people believe that scientists have the greatest influence on the world. Other people think that the influence of politicians is greater. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In todays modern world, the pressure of modern life is negative. What is your opinion .

‏In some countries, boys and girls are educated in different school rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?