The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The left and right buildings represent the current structure of the college and the changes which will done as planned.
Overall
, the infrastructure of both the present institution and the future plan is the same but some major and minor changes occurred including the tooth path and garden area which have been replaced by a parking zone additionally
some minor changes like the toilet being shifted from the front to backside.
However
, the entrance of the college is planned to develop in forthcoming in front of the bus stop. In addition
, the reception area changed from classroom space which is now in front of the entrance of the building. Moreover
, classrooms are increased in the future plans along with
a shop opening just behind the lunch area and a toilet is also
situated near the shop in the planned infrastructure.
Furthermore
, the library is also
shifted to the left side of the entry gate of the institution.Submitted by psingh8059 on
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