The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
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The chart and table represent the numbers of the community in Japan.
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,it is evident that there was a stable trend until 2005 and
then
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gradually dropped. To commence with in 1950 there was a population,which made up approximately 84,1 and
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there was a staid uptrend in 1955, which accounted for 90
million
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,respectively.
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, the same tendency was in 1960, which comprised 94,3
million
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and 104,6 in 1970,
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.
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, in 1975 there were record numbers of people , which accounted for 111,9 and
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gradually rose to 117
million
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in 1980.
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but not least, in 2005 there was a maximum amount of settlement, which made up 127,8
million
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,
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. When it comes to the opposite trend, which started in 2010 and made up about 127,1
million
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and
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in 2015 there was the same trend , which accounted for 125,4
million
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.
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, there was a considerable fall,which comprised about 110
million
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.In the end, statistics of Japan's society in 2035, made up 89,9
million
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,respectively. It may be concluded from the table that until 2005 there was an uptrend and
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a gradual fall in 2035.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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