The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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This
chart showcases the various types of transportaion
used by children in the years 1990 and 2010 and how frequently they were used. Correct your spelling
transportation
According to
the figuers
, the least common means of Correct your spelling
figures
transportaion
in 1990 were cars, Correct your spelling
transportation
whereas
it has been
the most popular of all in 2010. Children in 1990 went to Wrong verb form
was
school
on foot most of the times
. 20 years later, the number of students walking to Fix the agreement mistake
time
school
has decreased drastically, however
, it remains the second amognst
other types of transportation. The next most frequently used way to go to Correct your spelling
most
school
had
been taking the bus in 1990, which has changed the least during the next 20 years and sits at the third. Almost 6 Verb problem
was
millions
Change to singular
million
the
same number of students used cycling and a combination of walking and taking a bus to Change preposition
of the
school
. Based on the chart can see that cycling has dropped significantly in 2010, becoming the least used means of transport.Submitted by faragtaj6 on
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