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The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the given maps
depicts
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the
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apply
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information about the developments which have taken place in the town of
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Kingsville
kimsville
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Kimsville
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 one interesting change is that a new train station
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has
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ha
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has
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 been built which is nearer to
city
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the city
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 centre
similarly
,
twoard
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toward
 the
right hand
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 side of
metropolitan
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the metropolitan
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 there used to be a factory in 2002 but now it has been replaced by
software
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a software
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 company
moreover
, if
u
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you
 go upward on the left corner the tree has been knocked down to make way for new apartments
furthermore
, the shopping centre and large trees remain the same moving to
bottom
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 area, the old cinema
turn
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has turned
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 into
pub
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a pub
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as a
asa
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as a
 recreational spot
while
football
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a football
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 stadium has
constructed
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been constructed
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 on the
area of
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 greener side
overall
, it is vividly manifested that the whole city has
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experienced
experianced
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experienced
 a significant modernization by adding new facilities of
stadium
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a stadium
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 pub and software company
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