The diagram illustrates how sewage water is recycled

The diagram illustrates how sewage water is recycled
The diagram illustrates how sewage
water
is recycled. It can be seen that the
process
comprises 3 main stages, beginning with wastewater being treated in a sewage plant and finishing with purified
water
for domestic use. In the first stage, household wastewater from a range of uses
such
as restrooms, baths and sinks is released into sewers that lead to a sewage plant.
Then
, it will be contained in tanks before solid waste is separated to create fertilizer. In the next stage, in order to get rid of remaining organisms, bacteria that are able to digest them will be added to the
water
.
Subsequently
, a small volume of treated
water
is discharged into rivers.
At the end
of the
process
, the
water
is transferred to a purification facility where it undergoes the purification
process
. Some extra
water
will be pumped in during the
process
.
Finally
, when the
water
is clean enough for consumption, it will be supplied to households via
water
mains to be used again.
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