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industries
Brazil
economy in 2009 Change noun form
Brazil's
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2019 and 2029
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Overall
, it is clear that
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economic growth. Change preposition
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the food processing and the manufacturing are the least.
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of the finance first, the trend of Correct your spelling
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was on the rise in the past, with over one-third and over 35% respectively, ans
it is expected to increase up to 40% in 2029. But the opposite trend can Correct your spelling
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manufacturing. There were around 20% in 2009 and got down to just 15% in 2019. Change preposition
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figure will decrease again in a decade, at onle
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food processing and oil coal and gas, both of them achieved the highest ratio in 2019, at 22% and 32% respectively. The former Correct article usage
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will drop to around 10% and the latter will go back to a quarter again in 2029. At Correct pronoun usage
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