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five different

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economy in 2009

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2019 and 2029

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finance accounts for a considerable amount

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economic growth.

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the food processing and the manufacturing are the least.

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was on the rise in the past, with over one-third and over 35% respectively,

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manufacturing. There were around 20% in 2009 and got down to just 15% in 2019.

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food processing and oil coal and gas, both of them achieved the highest ratio in 2019, at 22% and 32% respectively. The former

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will drop to around 10% and the latter will go back to a quarter again in 2029. At

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tourism offered more than 25% in 2009 but it will decrease by 5% and will remain at

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level in 2029.