the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The column chart illustrates the
production
and
consumption
of
electricity
in ten different countries in the year 2014.
Overall
, in 2014, Chinese people were the largest
electricity
consumers and producers,
whereas
Korean people had the lowest
consumption
and
production
of
electricity
in the same year.
Moreover
, Americans placed the second highest consumer and producer of
electricity
. In 2014, the
production
of
electricity
in nine countries was more than its
consumption
.
However
, Germans were an exception in
this
case. In China, the figures for
production
and
consumption
of
electricity
were the highest at 5,398
billion
kWh
and 5322
billion
kWh
, respectively.
By contrast
, the numbers for consumed and produced
electricity
in Korea were the smallest at 449
billion
kWh
and 485
billion
kWh
, respectively.
Furthermore
, America was the second largest producer and consumer of
electricity
at 4099
billion
kWh
and 3866
billion
kWh
, respectively. It is worth noting that Germany was the only country in which the
consumption
of
electricity
was more than the
production
of it at 582
billion
kWh
compared to 526
billion
kWh
.
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  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • gigawatt hours (GWh)
  • renewable energy sources
  • non-renewable energy sources
  • industrialization
  • economic activities
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainability
  • energy efficiency
  • power generation
  • grid capacity
  • energy policies
  • consumption patterns
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