the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The column chart illustrates the
production
and consumption
of electricity
in ten different countries in the year 2014.
Overall
, in 2014, Chinese people were the largest electricity
consumers and producers, whereas
Korean people had the lowest consumption
and production
of electricity
in the same year. Moreover
, Americans placed the second highest consumer and producer of electricity
. In 2014, the production
of electricity
in nine countries was more than its consumption
. However
, Germans were an exception in this
case.
In China, the figures for production
and consumption
of electricity
were the highest at 5,398 billion
kWh
and 5322 billion
kWh
, respectively. By contrast
, the numbers for consumed and produced electricity
in Korea were the smallest at 449 billion
kWh
and 485 billion
kWh
, respectively. Furthermore
, America was the second largest producer and consumer of electricity
at 4099 billion
kWh
and 3866 billion
kWh
, respectively. It is worth noting that Germany was the only country in which the consumption
of electricity
was more than the production
of it at 582 billion
kWh
compared to 526 billion
kWh
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