The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the number of five mobile phone brands sold for six consecutive years between 2006 and 2012. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that Nokia and Samsung recorded the highest figures for sales, while
Apple stuck with the lowest number of sales. Ericsson and Motorola are the brands that are not as popular as Nokia and Samsung but show higher numbers of sales rather than Apple.Submitted by Deddymus on
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