The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in

1981, 1991 and 2001.
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The graphs show the amount of change in annual expenditure by a particular school in England in three separate years, 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, the largest proportion of total school expenditures was allocated to teacher
salaries
in 1991,
while
that of insurance expenses was the lowest in 1981.Between 1981 and 2001, there was a significant decrease in costs related to
resource
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resources
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such
as books and other workers'
salaries
. In all three years, the greatest expenditure was
for
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on
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the
salaries
of instructors and it reached its peak, which is 50%, in 1991. But
while
, in 1981, 28% of total school expenses were paid for
salaries
of other workers, over the following 20 years, that of workers
salaries
fell dramatically (15%). Despite the fact that the cost of resources
such
as books had risen to 20% by 1991, it was only 9%
at the end
of the period. In 1991, furniture and equipment expenditures went down only a very small number of total expenditures and more than quadrupled in 2001.
Similarly
, the cost of insurance saw a rising trend, growing only 2% to 8% by 2001.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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