In most countries around the world, children begin learning the English language at school from the primary level. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teaching the English language to children at an early age?

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is easier than in
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is the most popular
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around the world.
This
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is why most countries tend to teach the
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at begin of school
of
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. There are many advantages and
disadvantages
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of learning the
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language
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to
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at an early age. In
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, I will discuss some advantages and
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to study
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another mother
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at begin of school. Easily accept any
languge
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at an early age of
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that enhances on
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cognitive development.
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, it can improve cognitive skills,
such
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as problem-solving and creative thinking.
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, learning a second
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can make
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good future career prospects
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. Proficiency in
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, a global lingua franca, can open up various opportunities in international fields. Aid in the
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of cultural
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, exposure to the
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can encourage
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to learn about and appreciate different cultures. Meanwhile,
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on
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may lead to diminished proficiency in a child's native
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. Another
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an unequal opportunities
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because not all families or schools may have the resources to provide quality
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education, leading to disparities in learning outcomes. Possible cognitive overload - For some
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, learning a new
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at an early age might be overwhelming, affecting their
overall
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learning experience. In conclusion, learning the most important
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makes a better difference
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individual life. in my
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there are pit of
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but
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they are not so matter against
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • creative thinking
  • problem-solving
  • proficiency
  • global lingua franca
  • career prospects
  • cultural awareness
  • mother tongue
  • disparities
  • cognitive overload
  • linguistic diversity
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • pedagogical approaches
  • curriculum design
  • language acquisition
  • global mobility
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