The diagrams below give information about the manufacutre of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the process of production of frozen fish pies.
Overall
, potato production takes longer to deliver in
compared with fresh salmon. The potatoes and the Change preposition
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fishes
go into different mechanisms in order to be dispatched by boiling and steaming in the oven respectively.
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fish
To begin
with, potatoes take about one month to be delivered then
they go into various processesincluding
cleaning, peeling, slicing, Correct your spelling
processes including
boilling
, chilling and eventually Correct your spelling
boiling
billing
staring
, which will be wrapped with prepared sauce from the fresh salmon.
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starting
Furthermore
, the fish takes about 12 hours or less to reach the manufactury. Started by adding lemon juice and salt then
putting it on the steam oven. After that, workers will remove the skins and bones pass them on to the inspector then
add the prepared peas. Lastly
, when the sauce is prepared it will be combined with the stared potatoes then
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and then
freezed
to take it to the stores.Correct your spelling
frozen
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