What are the pros and cons for children of watching television?
Today watching
television
is one of the good way that people can spend their time, up
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themself
with news and events around the world, learning Correct pronoun usage
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programs
to approve
their skills like cooking and body activities Verb problem
improve
and
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children
like adult people can use this
programs
and animations.
Animations and child programs
are the best part of watching television
because they can learn
and show the different parts of life to Verb problem
teach
children
and they can give the
better Correct article usage
a
sence
of life.
Watching Correct your spelling
sense
television
is best
way when parents are busy and they want to do their Change the article
the best
works
and activities, they can entertain their Fix the agreement mistake
work
children
with it. Sometimes, some television
programs
invite children
for
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to
live
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the live
program
because Fix the agreement mistake
programs
children
in addition
physical
activities, Change preposition
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they
need to join Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
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some
group in global Correct your spelling
same
programs
and manage the number of team
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television
is a
easy way to learn and Change the article
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getting
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get
children
of the area because is free and interesting.
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Unfortunately
Unfurtunatly
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Unfortunately
television
has some disadvantages like television
content are enjoyable and colorful
and you can spend hours and Change the spelling
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children
forget some works
like homework, exercise or Fix the agreement mistake
work
eat
food and some like that Wrong verb form
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Also
watching television
can influence on
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body
like Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
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children
learn something that children
programs
teach them and parents told our children
learning all of their skills because television
is everything is perfect also
some series and movies is not good for children
and influence on their mind
Watching television
is a show of the important influence in
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on
children
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children's
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should because children
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- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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