The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The flow chart displays information about deforestation.
The main consequences and outcomes of deforestation can be divided into four important categories.
firstly
, heavy logging equipment will compact the soil, making it hard and
dry and cracked. Correct word choice
apply
Therefore
, rainwater runoff causes devastating floods.
Second,
cutting down trees in forests can cause fewer tree roots to hold topsoil, leading to soil erosion. Furthermore
, deforestation can increase the risk of both intentional and unintentional acts, leading to the destruction of wood waste and waste-eating microorganisms. Additionally
, it can also
lead to drought due to
less rainfall due to
less heat from the air by plants. All of these problems can lead to an increase in species and degradation of vegetation, ultimately leading to less biodiversity.Submitted by thuhong.68hnue on
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