The three pie charts illustrate how many hours undergraduates, postgraduates and total student population spent in a British university library.
The three pie charts compare the time that undergraduates,
postgraduates
and all of
the students spend in a British college Change preposition
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library
. Besides
, there are three different time expenditures including one
hour to seven
hours
,8 hours
to 14 hours
and above 15 hours
.
Overall
, the vast majority of students spent one
to seven
hours
in the British college library
, whilst most of the postgraduates
spent over 15 hours
.
According to
the information shown in the graph, 50% of the total student population spent one
to seven
hours
in the library
and only 15% of them stayed there for over 15 hours
. On the other hand
, 63% of undergraduates stayed in the library
for one
to seven
hours
which was seven
times higher than those who were in library
for more than 15 Add an article
the library
hours
. What should be particularly mentioned is that 51% of postgraduates
spent over 15 hours
in the library
and 32% of them spent eight to fourteen hours
there which was almost as twofold as those postgraduates
who spent one
to seven
hours
in the library
.
To sum up
, it can be apparently
Replace the word
apparent
seen
that Verb problem
apply
postgraduates
spent more time in the library
than other students.Submitted by s99104032 on
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