Task 1 : The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

Task 1 : The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The diagram illustrates the process of deforestation .There are four main stages in
this
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process , beginning with heaven logging equipment
compresses
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compressing
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the
soil
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, fewer roots
hold
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holding
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the
top
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topsoil
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soil
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in place, increased risk of burning, and the
last
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is plants return less moisture to
air
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the air
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First,
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when the
soil
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is compressed by heavy equipment. It causes the
soil
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to become hard and 'baked', causing rainwater to run off and result in flooding.
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the accompanying consequence of logging is that there are fewer roots to hold together. Leading to
soil
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erosion. The third impact is forest burning, both deliberate and accidental, increasing the risk of forest fires. The waste that remains after logging is destroyed and the micro-organisms that feed on
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material are lost. And
finally
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to degraded vegetation . The final consequence is a reduction in the amount of moisture plants return to the air. Because there is less moisture in the air, it leads to less rainfall, leading to increased drought. It leads to reduced plant growth leading to degradation and loss of plant biodiversity.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words soil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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