The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The given chart
illustrate
the quantity of magazines sold by Change the verb form
illustrates
induvidual
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individual
person
in five different countries from 2003 to 2007.
The chart shows the quantity of Fix the agreement mistake
people
magazine
sold Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
individual
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by individual
person
in Fix the agreement mistake
people
country
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three years is lower and if we talk about higher Correct article usage
apply
then
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than
compition
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competition
in
between Change preposition
apply
two
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the two
country
which Change to a plural noun
countries
is
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are
country
A and country
B
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
magazine
sold Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
in
between Change preposition
apply
these
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this two country
these two countries
two
country
in 2003 to 2007 are slightly similar.
In the given chart number of sold
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the sold
a sold
magazine
in county E is very low in 2003 and 2007
is nearly about 3 or in Change preposition
in 2007
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the mid
mid year
2005 which is nearly 5 slighter much Add a hyphen
mid-year
highe
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higher
then
other Correct your spelling
than
two
year
.The higher number of Change to a plural noun
years
magazine
sold by Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
country
B
in three year
which much more higher Change to a plural noun
years
then
if we Correct your spelling
than
comapred
to Correct your spelling
compared
compare
other
four Correct article usage
the other
country
.In Change to a plural noun
countries
country
B
magazine
sold in 2003 is touched Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
to
50 or 2005 which little bit lower Change preposition
apply
then
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than
2003
which Change preposition
in 2003
is
approx 48 and in 2007 about 44.
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was
Then
the
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apply
country
A comes and the sold magazine
numbers differences is very neggilble
as compared to Correct your spelling
negligible
country
B
. In country
A in 2003 48 magazine
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magazines
sold
and in 2005 45 Add a missing verb
were sold
magazine
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magazines
sold
or in 2007 43 Add a missing verb
were sold
magazine
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magazines
sold
.After Add a missing verb
were sold
country
A and Fix the agreement mistake
countries
B
The C and D magazine
sold Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
is
in decreasing order lower numbers of Change the verb form
are
magazine
sold in Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
these
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this two country
these two countries
two
country
which is in country
D in 2003 and the number is nearly 17 and 23 in 2007 and 20 in 2005 or in country
C 35 in 2003,33 in 2005 and 32 in 2005.Submitted by sanjayrajput2163 on
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