The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The man-make diagram illustrates the method of producing leather in a factory.
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, it is a complex process, that involves 3 main steps, commencing with the initial material and
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preparing and processing the final products. The initial stage focuses on drying animal skin after collecting and selecting them.
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step is completed, the head material is transported to the leather factory where they are washed or even bleached with water and chemistry, for cleaning and removing impurities. After that, the skins concurrently are soaked in more lime for a
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before being put in the flattened machine to be rolled out. In the following juncture, the flattened skins are soaked again in the tannin which includes water and vegetable matter, which can help the products be more durable.
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when they are polished by the industrial device to make the skin evenly
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and durable
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taken to another company. The whole process terminates when the factory designs and crafts the final leather
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ready to be contributed
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