The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given graphs display the genres of
music
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albums
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bought by British individuals
according to
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gender and age.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the percentage of the male population purchasing the genres of
music
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albums
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is far higher than females.
Besides
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,
people
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aged 25-35 buy mostly Pop and Rock
music
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albums
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and
people
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in 45+ purchase less.
However
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, the opposite is true with Classical
music
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.
To begin
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with,
people
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come from a group of 25-34
year
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old and 16-24 have the highest rates of buying Pop
music
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albums
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with 32% for the former and 30% for the latter. Following that are customers in 35-44 and 45+ are around 25% and 10% respectively. If we look at Rock
music
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, the trend is almost similar. Moving on to the other categories, the highest customer rate
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Classical
music
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is 45+ which reaches around 20%, followed by
people
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in 25-34 has the second highest rate which is above 15%.
Lastly
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, 35-44 and 16-24 are the least customer rates of Classical
music
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and both are below 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words music, albums, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph representation
  • categorized
  • predominant
  • disparities
  • similarities
  • age-related preferences
  • noticeable trends
  • age brackets
  • wider appeal
  • demographics
  • speculate
  • resurgence
  • vinyl records
  • digital streaming
  • music genres
  • albums purchases
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