The diagram below shows the CO2 cycle

The diagram below shows the CO2 cycle
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the CO2 cycle
Presented for consideration is a
cycle
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giving information about the different stages of forming CO2. The most noticeable point about the
cycle
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is that it sheds light on the formation of
carbon
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through several stages beginning with photosynthesizing and ending with turning into atmosphere.
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, having completed all these steps, the
cycle
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will
then
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begin again. The most logical point to start at is the sunlight, which is transformed into organic
carbon
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through the stage of photosynthesizing by plants. The next step
after
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this
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is organic
carbon
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seeps
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into the ground when dead animals and waste products decay.
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of
this
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, a small part of organic
carbon
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is formed into fossils and fossil fuels. Moving on to the subsequent stage organic
carbon
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is turned into gas when animals and plants respire or another way is when the factory burns fossil fuels as raw material for the production process of cars
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factories,
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CO2 is formed and eliminated into the air in the form of emissions. The final stage of the
cycle
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is when the plants photosynthesize again and the CO2
cycle
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starts again.

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