You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of visitors
visiting a museum at a particular time
of two
sessions summer
and winter
in a particular period of year in 2003.
The graph shows that in summertime
there is a high Add an article
the summertime
number
of visitors
visiting in gallery according to
time
or in winter
session
number
of visitors
visit
in Correct article usage
a zig
zig zag
pattern with respect to Add a hyphen
zig-zag
time
.
In the given graph two
lines describing two
sessions summer
and winter
which show how many visitors
visit
a museum with respect to time
from time
0 to 1800.In the winter
session
higher number
of visitors
visit
in the summer
session
when the time
is nearly between 1100 to 1200 approx 1500 visitors
visit
the museum and from that point of time
that is
the peak time
when visitors
visit
in the summer
session
.
On the other hand
, if we talk about winter
Correct article usage
the winter
session
visitors
number
is quite lower Change preposition
than in then
then
Correct your spelling
the
summer
session
.In the winter
session
high
Change the article
a high
the high
number
of visitors
visit
between 1000 to 1100 and 1100 to 1200. In these two
particular times visitors
numbersvisitor
Change noun form
'
number
are the same which is nearly about 600 after that Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
number
of visitors
declines according to
time
and after 1400 time
visitor numbersnumber
constant.Replace the word
numbers are
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, time, two, summer, winter, session, visit with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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