The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
visiting a museum at a particular Use synonyms
time
of Use synonyms
two
sessions Use synonyms
summer
and Use synonyms
winter
in a particular period of year in 2003.
The graph shows that in Use synonyms
summertime
there is a high Add an article
the summertime
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
visiting in gallery Use synonyms
according to
Linking Words
time
or in Use synonyms
winter
Use synonyms
session
Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
visit
in Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a zig
zig zag
pattern with respect to Add a hyphen
zig-zag
time
.
In the given graph Use synonyms
two
lines describing Use synonyms
two
sessions Use synonyms
summer
and Use synonyms
winter
which show how many Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
visit
a museum with respect to Use synonyms
time
from Use synonyms
time
0 to 1800.In the Use synonyms
winter
Use synonyms
session
higher Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
visit
in the Use synonyms
summer
Use synonyms
session
when the Use synonyms
time
is nearly between 1100 to 1200 approx 1500 Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
visit
the museum and from that point of Use synonyms
time
Use synonyms
that is
the peak Linking Words
time
when Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
visit
in the Use synonyms
summer
Use synonyms
session
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, if we talk about Linking Words
Use synonyms
winter
Correct article usage
the winter
session
Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
number
is quite lower Use synonyms
Linking Words
Change preposition
than in then
then
Correct your spelling
the
summer
Use synonyms
session
.In the Use synonyms
winter
Use synonyms
session
Use synonyms
high
Change the article
a high
the high
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
visit
between 1000 to 1100 and 1100 to 1200. In these Use synonyms
two
particular times Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
numbersvisitor
Change noun form
'
Use synonyms
number
are the same which is nearly about 600 after that Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
declines Use synonyms
according to
Linking Words
time
and after 1400 Use synonyms
time
visitor Use synonyms
numbersnumber
constant.Replace the word
numbers are
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, time, two, summer, winter, session, visit with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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