The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok.

Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the rate of foreigners who travelled to various exotic places, including Zoo, Sea World, Wax Museum, and Chinatown, in Bangkok, Thailand between 2014 and 2017.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that there are upward and downward trends in the number of tourists.
In addition
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, the vast majority of people visited Chinatown;
In contrast
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, only the minority considered the Zoo. In 2014, all enjoyable facilities had a variety of tourist percentages and the sea world reached a peak, accounting for 70%.
However
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, apparently, its number fell considerably
together with
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Bangkok Zoo approximately 25% in 2015,
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it coincided with the wax museum and Chinatown which grew significantly to below 70% and 80%, respectively.
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, there was a moderate enhancement in all percentages of all participants about 15% in 2016, before their rate declined at the of the period. In detail, only wax museum visitors could decrease gradually by one-eighth;
nonetheless
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, the others went downhill to 20%, on average, in 2017.
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