The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line chart presents the quantities of
goods
transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002, using four different means of transportation including road, water, rail, and pipeline.
Overall
, throughout the whole time frame, the amount of
goods
transported increased in all four given ways.
Moreover
, the proportion of
goods
transported by road ranked
first,
while
that of pipeline stood
last
in the amount allocated. The largest quantity of
goods
transported both in 1974 and 2002 was by road (70
million
tonnes
and 98
million
tonnes
, respectively), meanwhile, the lowest during that time was a pipeline (about a very small number of
million
tonnes
and 22
million
tonnes
, respectively). From 1974 to 1978,
while
water and rail transportation experienced a consistent trend, at around two-fifths
million
tonnes
, over the following 20 years, they followed an opposite pattern with the former increasing, ranging from 40
million
tonnes
and almost 62
million
tonnes
, the latter decreasing, starting the point at two fifth
million
tonnes
, and finishing at its initiative value, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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