The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line chart presents the quantities of
goods
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transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002, using four different means of transportation including road, water, rail, and pipeline.
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, throughout the whole time frame, the amount of
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transported increased in all four given ways.
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, the proportion of
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transported by road ranked
first,
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while
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that of pipeline stood
last
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in the amount allocated. The largest quantity of
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transported both in 1974 and 2002 was by road (70
million
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tonnes
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and 98
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tonnes
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, respectively), meanwhile, the lowest during that time was a pipeline (about a very small number of
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tonnes
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and 22
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tonnes
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, respectively). From 1974 to 1978,
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water and rail transportation experienced a consistent trend, at around two-fifths
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tonnes
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, over the following 20 years, they followed an opposite pattern with the former increasing, ranging from 40
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tonnes
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and almost 62
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tonnes
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, the latter decreasing, starting the point at two fifth
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tonnes
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, and finishing at its initiative value, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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