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The table below shows oil production figures in four Africans countries from 2000 to 2004, in barrels per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows oil production figures in four Africans countries from 2000 to 2004, in barrels per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 table depicts the amount of
oil
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 which was produced by four countries in Africa continent throughout four years, and the unit of measurement is
barrels
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 per
day
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.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the
production
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 of
oil
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 in all countries over the given time except in
Congo
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, it was the opposite.
According to
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 what is shown,
Congo
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 prepared the biggest amount of
oil
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 in 2000, at 275000
barrels
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 per
day
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,
whereas
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 the
production
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 of Chad was zero in the same year. After that, the
production
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 of
Congo
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 was reduced gradually over the following years, until it reached 203000
barrels
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 per
day
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 in 2004. But despite the number of
barrels
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 of Chad per
day
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was
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 Zero in 2001 and 2003, it began to produce
oil
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 in 2003. Regarding Cote d’Ivoire, even though its
production
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 of
oil
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 was low in 2000, at 5000
barrels
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 per
day
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 compared to Nigeria, which gave 205000
barrels
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 per
day
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, the
production
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 of Cote d’Ivoire rose constantly over the subsequent years until it stopped, at 50000 in 2004, but the
production
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 of Nigra experienced fluctuation, as it dropped to 19000
barrels
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 per
day
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 in 2002,
then
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 it rose again.
To sum up
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, we could say the
production
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 of Nigeria and
Congo
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 from
oil
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 represented the majority of
production
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 compared to other countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, barrels, day, production, congo with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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