The given maps illustrate the changes in the ground floor of a library in 2001 and 2009.
It can be seen that the ground floor has witnessed a significant transformation. Most noticeably, the diverse topics of books and the introduction of computer devices.
Looking at the picture in detail, one can see that in the
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zone was narrowed and located among shelves of books of diverse genres that were added to enrich the reader's experience.
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the librarian's desk in the south remained unchanged, a children's books and
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area in the opposite direction were established to expand the readership target.
On the east side of the ground floor, the shelves for newspapers and periodicals were replaced to make way for films and DVDs. A new computer system was put in
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space to better cater to the search needs of users. In the centre area, there was a change in the number and style of tables to be suitable for the new zone.
