the diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

the diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The presented diagram illustrates data about the stages and equipment used in the
concrete making
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concrete-making
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process
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and in detail explains that
cement
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is used to produce concrete for building
purpose
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.Let us compare both
the
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cement
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production
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and concrete
production
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and find some
relevent
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relevant
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process
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processes
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in both activities. The first diagram illustrates
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cement
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production
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which concludes in four stages
such
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as crushing,mixing,heating,
grinding
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and grinding
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.
Initially
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, the
lime stones
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limestones
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and clay is dropped into a crusher and received in the form of fine powder.
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this
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powder
were
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poured into another hollow chamber for mixing and directly entering into the
rorating
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rotating
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heater and the powder stepped into the final stage
grinding
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of grinding
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and
at the end
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cenment
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cement
is produced and it is packed into a bag. The second diagram shows the raw materials for concrete
production
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that includes four
incredients
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ingredients
and it includes
cement
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15%,water 10%,
sand
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and
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25% and gravel 50%.All these
productrs
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products
are mixed in a large concrete mixer and mixed in anticlockwise movement.
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,the first
process
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shows
that
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how
cement
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produced
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is produced
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from
te
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the
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four
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process
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processes
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and the second one shows
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how concrete
produced
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is produced
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by using unprocessed materials that
includes
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include
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cement
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,water,sand and stones at a accurate percentage of that particular
resources
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resource
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, cement, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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