the diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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and in detail explains that

cement

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is used to produce concrete for building

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.Let us compare both

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cement

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production

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and concrete

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and find some

relevent

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relevant

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in both activities. The first diagram illustrates

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cement

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production

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which concludes in four stages

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as crushing,mixing,heating,

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and grinding

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.

Initially

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, the

lime stones

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limestones

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and clay is dropped into a crusher and received in the form of fine powder.

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powder

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poured into another hollow chamber for mixing and directly entering into the

rorating

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rotating

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heater and the powder stepped into the final stage

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and

at the end

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cenment

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cement

is produced and it is packed into a bag. The second diagram shows the raw materials for concrete

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that includes four

incredients

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ingredients

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cement

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15%,water 10%,

sand

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and

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25% and gravel 50%.All these

productrs

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are mixed in a large concrete mixer and mixed in anticlockwise movement.

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how

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produced

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from

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four

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and the second one shows

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how concrete

produced

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by using unprocessed materials that

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cement

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,water,sand and stones at a accurate percentage of that particular

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.