In some societies the number of crime committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary societies, the escalating rate of crimes committed by
teenagers
has sparked a debate on whether adolescents involved in major Use synonyms
offenses
should face Change the spelling
offences
adult
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punishments
. Use synonyms
This
contentious issue demands a nuanced consideration, and Linking Words
while
I acknowledge the severity of certain crimes, I contend that a one-size-fits-all approach is inappropriate.
First of all, it would Linking Words
be
not be fair for Unnecessary verb
apply
teenagers
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that
break important laws to serve the same punishment as Correct pronoun usage
who
adults
. Many youths do not have the same experience as Use synonyms
adults
and they lack a full understanding of the laws and the judicial process. Use synonyms
As a result
, it would amount to injustice when these ones receive Linking Words
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adults'
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adults
punishments
. Use synonyms
For example
, it would not be right for a Linking Words
14 year old
involved in Add a hyphen
14-year-old
physical
assault that endangers the life of his peers to serve the same punishment an Add an article
a physical
adult
who Use synonyms
commit
Change the verb form
commits
similar
crime receives. Correct article usage
a similar
Thus
, underage lawbreakers should not have the same Linking Words
punishments
as Use synonyms
adults
.
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
teenagers
who are punished as grownups may be negatively affected. Often, Use synonyms
adults
who break major laws are confined to prison, an act which will have deleterious consequences for young ones, owing to the fact that they could be exposed to other criminal acts by hardened Use synonyms
criminal
when they are in prison. Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
For instance
, underage lawbreakers in the United States of America are kept in juvenile correctional facilities to deter them from the undesired influences Linking Words
from
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of
adult
criminals. Use synonyms
Therefore
, when youngsters are punished like Linking Words
adults
, they could be negatively affected by other criminals
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
recognizing the gravity of crimes committed by Linking Words
teenagers
, I contend that subjecting them to Use synonyms
adult
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punishments
is overly punitive and neglects the developmental nuances of adolescence. A more balanced and empathetic approach involves investing in rehabilitation, addressing the underlying causes of delinquency, and fostering positive transformation for the benefit of both the individual and society at large.Use synonyms
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