The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the pattern of tea and
coffee
consumption by Australians in the five different cities
of this
country, in percentage
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that most people went to coffee
shops to buy these drinks in the last
four weeks in all the cities
, except the ones living in Adelaide who are mostly into buying instant
coffee
.
With a comparison between these places, individuals living in Melbourn have the highest percentage
of going to cafes in the last
4 weeks with 64% of all, however
, the data in Horbat and Sydney are so close to the number in Melbourn. On the other hand
, Horbat has the highest percentage
of instant
coffee
consumption, as more than half of the society has been a fan of these kinds of coffee
in the last
month. Adelaidians, therefore
, have the lowest percentage
overall
for having hot drinks including tea and coffee
with only half of the notion buying instant
coffee
. Buying fresh coffee
in the last
month, however
, consists of the lowest percentage
in all of these five Australian cities
, with the highest percentage
belonging to Sydney with less than 45%.
To conclude
, Australians in the five cities
mentioned are more likely to go to cafes instead
of having either fresh or instant
coffee
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