The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides information about the destinations of people who finished the Anthropology course from one school,
on the other hand
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, the table presents their income after working for five years.
Overall
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, a high portion of graduates were able to work after school,
while
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the remaining were either studying or unemployed. Those who were working for the government received higher salaries compared to freelancers and private companies. More than half of Anthropology undergraduates were able to land a full-time job after their graduation,
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15% were doing part-time. Those who were working part-time and studying postgraduate study at the same time and those who were enrolled for full-time postgrad study were recorded at 5% and 8%, respectively . For the remaining 20%, they were either unemployed or their status was unknown.
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, 50% of Anthropology undergraduates who were employees of the government were receiving more than $100,000, the highest salary among others,
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40% of freelance consultants were generating an income of $75,000-$100,000.
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, one-third of people working in private companies were receiving $50,000-$75,000.
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