The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.

The illustration displays the hydro-electric power process.

Overall

, the

hydro-eletric

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hydroelectric

power relies on fresh

water

only. The

recycle

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of

water

is essential to the process.

Also

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it is

improtant

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important

to build

the

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dam

in order to store enough amount of

water

in the reservoir for the whole process. Fresh

water

comes from the rain. The

sea

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seawater

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water

evaporates

due to

the heat from the sun, leaving the salt behind.

First

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the

rain

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rainwater

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water

is collected in the reservoir built at the side of the mountain, using

this

location to help the flow of

water

. On the other side of the

damn

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there is a valve which is

use

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used

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to

controlled

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the

water

in the

dam

to flow in the system by the time they open it. Fresh

water

from the

dam

will be sent to the turbine first to create the

movementum

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movement

momentum

of the

chrage

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charge

and

then

converted

it

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into electricity. The electricity will

tranfer

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transfer

along the high voltage cables to the transformer station. The transformer will

sent

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send

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the electricity to

school

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schools

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,

hospital

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hospitals

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and for household usage through the underground cables. The

water

in the turbine , after it already

produce

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energy, will be sent to the pump to pump it back to the

dam

.