Your public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter, describe what you like about the library, say what you don't like and make suggestions for improvements.

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task achievement
To improve your task response, try to answer all parts of the prompt fully. Describe what you like about the library, mention the aspects you do not like, and make specific suggestions for improvements.
coherence cohesion
For a better structure, start your letter with a proper greeting to the librarian and conclude it with an appropriate sign-off. This will help to create a clear beginning and end to your letter.
coherence cohesion
Organize your letter into paragraphs, focusing on a single idea in each paragraph: one for what you like, one for what you don't, and one for your suggestions. This will enhance the logical flow and clarity of your message.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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