Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give opinions.

Nowadays,

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lessons

are so significant for all

pupils

.

Therefore

, people argue about the

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ingredients

ingredient

of

lessons

.

While

, some

individiuals

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individuals

say

history

is

one

of the most important school subjects, others think in today's world, subjects

science

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of science

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and

technology

are more important than

history

. Both views have upsides and downsides, in my opinion,

history

is the most significant

lesson

for all ages children.

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essay will explain those below.

Firstly

, every

people

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person

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should know

history

because if citizens do not know

history

, they do not understand in present. Thanks to

history

,

pupils

learn important

war

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wars

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, some

physcologic

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psychological

tactics or important terms which

is

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are

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connected by

history

.

For instance

, when

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I

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was in high school,

history

was my favorite

lesson

.

Due to

this

situation,

i

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am more successful than other

pupils

.

Moreover

,

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during an

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an

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university exam

i

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I

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achieved my goals with

history

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lesson

.

Secondly

,

science

and

technology

lessons

importance have developed all around the world.

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times, every

schools

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school

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can teach these

lessons

for

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to

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their learners.

Thus

, a lot of students want to know these

lessons

for their

the

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lives

of

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in

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future

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as almost all employers want to

knowledge

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know

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employees

which

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who

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are

knowledge

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knowledgeable

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about

technology

and

science

.

For example

, two employees want to

entrance

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same

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the same

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job.

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first

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one

expert

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is expert

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on

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in

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science

and

technology

other

one

can not understand these

lessons

. All employers want to work first

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apply

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one

. In conclusion, all around the world

schools

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school

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lessons

are

so

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very

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significant for all

pupils

. As a

results

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result

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, people argue about these

lessons

.

While

some citizens support that

history

is more important others believe that

technology

and

science

lessons

are more significant than

history

lesson

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. In my view, both views have advantages and disadvantages.

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However

,

history

is the most important

lesson

for students.