The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,  and make comparisons where relevent.
The diagram provides a public library's floor plans from 20 years ago and the current layout.
Overall
, the librarian's desk and stairs still remained at the entrance,
while
the newspapers and periodicals
has
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disappeared and
replaced
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by films and DVDs. Shelves have more sections with
variety
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of books. From the floor plans, the
librarian
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desk still
locate
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in front of the entrance, with the stairs on the right side. Shelves
is
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still
lay
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from the left to the furthest wall from the entrance.
However
, they are divided into seven sections,from three in the past, which enable the library to have more types of books.
Moreover
, the table was changed from eight small tables to four long tables.
The computers
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are
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added
in
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, for playing films and DVDs that replaced the newspapers and periodicals.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • visitor engagement
  • digitally equipped
  • technological advancements
  • community engagement
  • early education
  • print media
  • digital access
  • visitor orientation
  • accessibility
  • premises
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