The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The diagram provides a public library's floor plans from 20 years ago and the current layout.
Overall
, the librarian's desk and stairs still remained at the entrance, Linking Words
while
the newspapers and periodicals Linking Words
has
disappeared and Change the verb form
have
replaced
by films and DVDs. Shelves have more sections with Add a missing verb
been replaced
variety
of books.
From the floor plans, the Add an article
a variety
librarian
desk still Change noun form
librarian's
locate
in front of the entrance, with the stairs on the right side. Shelves Wrong verb form
located
is
still Change the verb form
are
lay
from the left to the furthest wall from the entrance. Wrong verb form
laid
However
, they are divided into seven sections,from three in the past, which enable the library to have more types of books.
Linking Words
Moreover
, the table was changed from eight small tables to four long tables. Linking Words
The computers
Correct article usage
Computers
are
addedWrong verb form
were
in
, for playing films and DVDs that replaced the newspapers and periodicals.Change preposition
apply
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