The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for
last
year.
Overall
, in the given chart, South Asia has the highest percentage of illiterate people while
Developed countries have the lowest. On the other hand
, females
who are illiterate are more than males
in every region.
According to
the chart, we can see that there are about 55 percent
of illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
females
in South Asia and around 34 percent
of illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
males
, which is the most illiteracy region. In Sub-Saharan Africa, there are about 49 percent
of illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
females
and around 31 percent
of illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
males
. East Asia/ Oceania has a lower percentage of illiterate people rather than the two regions I mentioned above, which has 20 percent
of illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
females
and about 8 percent
of illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
males
. Developed Countries has
the lowest percentage of people who are Correct subject-verb agreement
have
illiterates
, which has under 5 Fix the agreement mistake
illiterate
percent
of illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
female
and almost Fix the agreement mistake
females
none
illiterate Correct quantifier usage
no
males
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