The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for
last
year.
Overall
, in the given chart, South Asia has the highest percentage of illiterate people
while
Developed countries have the lowest.
On the other hand
,
females
who are illiterate are more than
males
in every region.
According to
the chart, we can see that there are about 55
percent
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per cent
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of illiterate
females
in South Asia and around 34
percent
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per cent
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of illiterate
males
, which is the most illiteracy region. In Sub-Saharan Africa, there are about 49
percent
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per cent
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of illiterate
females
and around 31
percent
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per cent
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of illiterate
males
. East Asia/ Oceania has a lower percentage of illiterate people rather than the two regions I mentioned above, which has 20
percent
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per cent
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of illiterate
females
and about 8
percent
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per cent
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of illiterate
males
. Developed Countries
has
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have
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the lowest percentage of people who are
illiterates
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illiterate
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, which has under 5
percent
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per cent
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of illiterate
female
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females
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and almost
none
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no
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illiterate
males
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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