the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particulat carribean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the informattion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particulat carribean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the informattion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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This
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line graph illustrates how many visitors have
traveled
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to Caribbean islands in the period of time from 2010 to 2017. The
data
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depicts the ones that stayed on ships, stayed on the island, and the total
number
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.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that most of the visitors spent their time staying on the island until 2015,
while
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the plot twisted in 2016, as people tend to prefer staying on the cruise and the
data
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continued until 2017. With a comparison between the provided
data
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, in the first
year
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, almost 1
million
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tourists spent their journey on the island and it continued until the next
year
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. The
number
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rose slightly afterward and it reached 1.5
million
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for three years in a row, starting from 2013 until 2015,
however
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, it did not continue, as the
data
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had a plateau and the
number
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decreased to 1.3
million
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then
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reached the previous
number
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again.
On the other hand
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, less than half of a
million
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people stayed on cruise ships in the beginning,
therefore
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,
this
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number
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went through an unstable change and reached 1
million
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by 2014,
then
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increased sharply as it eventually showed the
number
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of 2
million
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visitors staying on these ships by the end of 2017. The total
number
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,
moreover
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, increased from the first
year
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starting from 1
million
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individuals and reaching almost 3
million
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in 2015, and remained the same in 2016, but rose
up
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sharply and reached the maximum
number
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of 3.5
million
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in the
last
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year
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of
this
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period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words data, number, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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