The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph shows the
population
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percentage
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of living
cities
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in four countries, i.e. Philippines,
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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and
Indonesia
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. The x-axis is the representative year which shows the
population
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percentage
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(y-axis) every ten
years
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.
Malaysia
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and
Indonesia
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have had a progressive
percentage
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of
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population
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the population
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living in the
cities
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over the
years
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and
predicted
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are predicted
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to grow in the next 20
years
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,
while
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Thailand
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had a relatively stagnant growth
in
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from
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1990 to 2020, around 30% of their total
population
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.
In
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From
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1990 to 2010, the
Philippine's
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Philippine
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population
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percentage
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living in
cities
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had
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decreased and started to increase in 2020. In 2020, the most urbanized country was
Malaysia
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, followed by
Indonesia
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, Philippines and
Thailand
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. It is predicted that the ranking
would
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will
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be the same in 20
years
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ahead with all
increasing
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the increasing
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trends of
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population
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the population
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living in the
cities
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.
Malaysia
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will reach over 80% of their
population
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living in the
cities
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in 2030 and 2040.
Indonesia
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will slightly get over 60% but
Philippines
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the Philippines
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and
Thailand
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will not exceed the number of 60%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, percentage, cities, malaysia, thailand, indonesia, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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