The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph shows the

population

percentage

of living

cities

in four countries, i.e. Philippines,

Malaysia

,

Thailand

and

Indonesia

. The x-axis is the representative year which shows the

population

percentage

(y-axis) every ten

years

.

Malaysia

and

Indonesia

have had a progressive

percentage

of

population

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the population

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living in the

cities

over the

years

and

predicted

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are predicted

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to grow in the next 20

years

,

while

Thailand

had a relatively stagnant growth

in

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from

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1990 to 2020, around 30% of their total

population

.

In

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From

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1990 to 2010, the

Philippine's

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Philippine

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population

percentage

living in

cities

had

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decreased and started to increase in 2020. In 2020, the most urbanized country was

Malaysia

, followed by

Indonesia

, Philippines and

Thailand

. It is predicted that the ranking

would

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will

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be the same in 20

years

ahead with all

increasing

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the increasing

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trends of

population

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the population

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living in the

cities

.

Malaysia

will reach over 80% of their

population

living in the

cities

in 2030 and 2040.

Indonesia

will slightly get over 60% but

Philippines

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the Philippines

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and

Thailand

will not exceed the number of 60%.