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The chart belows shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart belows shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of
households
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 in
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the united
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united states
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United States
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 categorized by their yearly income for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015. In general, the fluctuations are evident in the number of
households
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 earning less than $25,000; $25,000 - $49,999; and $100,000 or more annually,
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 the figures for the other income brackets remain relatively stable. In 2007, the number of
households
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 earning less than $25000 income stood at 25
million
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, which rose slightly to just below 30
million
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 by 2011 before it dropped to around 28
million
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 by 2015.
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, families earning $25,000-$49,999 numbered around 27
million
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 in 2007, rising to approximately 30
million
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 by 2011 before it decreased to around 28
million
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 by 2015.
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, families earning $100,000 or more began at slightly below 30
million
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 in 2007, decreased to around 28.5
million
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 by 2011, and
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 experienced a significant rise to approximately 33
million
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 by 215.
In addition
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,
households
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 earning $50,000 to $74,999 wages remained constant throughout the period of 2007 to 2015,
while
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 those earning $75,000 to $99,999 saw only slight changes.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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