The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the average price
change
of three
metals for each month of 2014. In general, Nickel’s trend was
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the
experienced the most fluctuation, Correct article usage
apply
while
copper was the most stable among the three
. Another notable trend is the decrease in price for all three
metals during the period from February to May.
In January, nickel saw the highest change
of six per cent
before it experienced a major drop until June, resulting in a decrease of three
per cent
, the lowest in the particular year. It then
gradually rose back up, ending with one
per Correct article usage
a one
cent
of
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apply
change
in December.
Zinc started the year with one
per Correct article usage
a one
cent
change
and rose to three
per cent
by February. However
, it constantly decreased to negative one
per cent
by June. Despite the drop, Zinc managed to have higher
number than other metals by the end of the year.
Add an article
a higher
Finally
, Copper exhibited the most consistent trend of all. Its changes fluctuated gradually, with the difference in price between January and December being under one
per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, three, cent, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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