Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map shows a construction suggestion made by planners of a city named Brandfield which offers to put 3 buildings up. The

center

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of the place is surrounded by transportation roads and 3 places, a leisure facility, one residential area and an estate for industrial purposes. The city has both rail and

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road way

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and a river runs through it. One of the designed

site

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sites

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named S1 was planned to

built

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be built

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the

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north of the center, surrounded by rail

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road

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, the river and the way, whilst the other was

estimaded

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estimated

construct

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to the

south-east

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southeast

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part of the location, between the

road

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and the rails. It is clear from the map that city planners have no idea where to put the shopping

center

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and

therefore

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this

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part of the question cannot be answered by myself. If I

was

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the one to decide on

this

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matter, depending on the size of the mall, I would say it could be placed

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the

east-side

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east side

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between the river and the

road

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however

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, building it

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the area between S1 and

industrial

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the industrial

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estate would be better for transactional reasons.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

city planners
proposed
shopping mall
the main features
comparisons
advantages
disadvantages
recommendation
site selection

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