Learning English is important. Do you agree or disagree ?
Some
people
believe that studying English
is essential. This
essay agrees that learning English
could open a new world and a lot of chance. Firstly
it is good for studying abroad and secondly
, it is good for open own business.
On the one hand, knowing English
who pass foreign university entrance exams. Nowadays many young people
taught to English
language
. This
is a result of many people
being rich and working well-paid jobs. Studying abroad can be expensive but learning English
gives many chances to work or study. For example
, many places have people
who are learning to English
language
after that they can earn money for their university contract.
On the other hand
, learning English
opens new businesses, teaches English
to children, earns a lot of money, travels around the world, and so on. This
can help improve the language
and study popular university without extra money. For instance
, those studying English
who have an expensive house, car, own business, and so on. So many young people
studying the English
language
.
In conclusion, I agree that knowing English
who able to study foreign country, begin their own business, earn a good salary, around the world, and speak with foreign people
without a translater, and so on. Learning English
is vital because it has a lot of opportunities.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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