The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdom, sweden, italy,and portuhal between 1967 and 2007
The line graph below illustrates the data
of
carbon dioxide in the UK, Change preposition
on
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. The
measured in metric Correct your spelling
They
tonnes
.
Overall
, it can be seen that United
Kingdom was the highest country that used carbon. Correct article usage
the United
Whereas
, Portugal was the lowest according to
the given numbers.
According to
the charts, at
the first period of Change preposition
in
time
Uk was the first country in the line with almost 12 metric Add a comma
time,
tonnes
and slightly dropped to just below 10 metric tonnes
in 2007. However
, Sweden
started with around 8 metric tonnes
and hit the pecked at 11 in 1977. On the other hand
, after 1977 Sweden
dramatically dropped to 5 metric tonnes
at the end
of period
.
Add an article
the period
Furthermore
, Italy and Portugal begin closely with between 3 and 6 metric tonnes
and both of them continue to rose
. Italy reached Wrong verb form
rise
at
just below 7 in 2007. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, Portugal also
slightly rose and meet
with Wrong verb form
met
Sweden
at the end
of the period, accounting to
both of them stopped at 5 in 2007.Change preposition
for
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