Traffic jams are a problem in many towns and cities today. Some people say that the solution is to build wider roads. Do you agree or disagree?

Congestion

is a huge issue around the world, particularly

metropolis

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and cities

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these days. Some people believe that

construction

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the construction

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of specious roadways can solve

this

trouble. I strongly disagree with

this

statement because there are other

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ways to mitigate

this

issue.

This

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,

building

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the building

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of broad roads cannot solve

traffic

problem

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problems

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due to

outnumbered of private vehicles on cites

road

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roads

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in

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everyday

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.

This

means people use private vehicles for their

work-purpose

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work

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enormously than personal work, so

congestion

happens daily In

towns

, especially

peak

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during peak

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hours. Using

of

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public

transportation

can reduce

traffic

jam

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jams

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around urban areas. For

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Indian government has started

awareness

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an awareness

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program of using public

transportation

among daily commuters

such

as office goers

instead

of building highway roads, and as a

results

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Indian

congestion

rate has reduced than other nations. Needless to say,

congestion

trouble in

towns

might

on

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be reduced by utilising

the

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public

transportation

instead

of own cars.

Furthermore

, the authority should provide all the fundamental benefits to countrysides as cities in order to individual's migration to

towns

may be reduced, so metropolis

traffic

jam

also

reduces.

For instance

,

Indian

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government allocates all the

benenfits

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benefits

to their village citizens

for reducing

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to reduce

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migration ratio to the urban places namely, schools, hospitals, and recreational facilities.

In addition

, when companies

starts

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in rural locations

while

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village residents will have to chance to work and earn money from

this

,

therefore

,

citie's

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traffic

jam

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jams

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may be decreased. In conclusion, indeed metropolis have

traffic

jam

problem

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a problem

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in

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these days, so building

of

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wider roads can solve

this

issue. I strongly disagree with

this

statement because using the

puplic

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public

transportation

and the

rulling

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ruling

party tries to retain the village residents in their place by providing all facilities as

towns

.