The chart below gives some information about the growth of the urban population in certain parts of the world (including the prediction of the future). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Task 1 The

given

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bar chart gives information about the

increase

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in the

population

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Latin

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America

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/Caribbean,

Africa

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, Asia and the whole

world

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1950 and 2000. It provides predictions about the year 2030 as well. It is evident from the graph that, in 1959,

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America

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had the highest urban

population

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at 42% of the total

population

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followed by the

world

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at 30% of the total

population

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Whereas

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Africa

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and Asia had

very

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less urban

population

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at 12% and 15% respectively. By 2000, the urban

population

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Latin

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America

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increased

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by reaching 70 % of the total

population

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Similarly

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, a steady growth can

also

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be seen in

Africa

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and Asia with both witnessed 26% and 23%

increase

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, the whole

world

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had

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noticed an 18%

increase

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in its urban

population

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, the urban

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is expected to rise

further

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by 2030. Almost, 80% of the

population

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Latin

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America

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and

Caribbean

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the Caribbean

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is expected to see a rise in its

population

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by 18%.

Africa

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is expected to see a rise

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14% and

lastly

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urban

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the urban

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population

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in the whole

world

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also

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expected to

increase

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by 12%. 185 words

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Vocabulary: Replace the words increase, population, latin, america, africa, world with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

190 words

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historical data
urbanization trends
rates of growth
developed countries
developing countries
economic development
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upward trend
pace of urbanization
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comparative analysis
regional differences

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The chart below gives some information about the growth of the urban population in certain parts of the world (including the prediction of the future). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, wave and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens eat a healthy diet. Others believe that individuals must take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that finding a job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly pepole.